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New Format for Tom

Sun May 24, 2009, 1:34 PM
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After what seems like years of identity crisis for the Tom Vice story, between strictly writing and drawing, I've decided to illustrate my stories. Please see my re-done d+g chapter 1. Click download to view. More to come.

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I LOVE the drawings on pgs. 3 & 4, especially the one where they're all looking up. You really caught that one. I also like the one where Eleanor and Tom are his apartment or whatever...her head is clipped off, which seems to be a different approach for you. I like it....but the one where they're looking up actually made me feel dizzy. I have a weird phobia or something when it comes to heights. I get a this dizzy, "I THINK I'M GONNA JUMP!!" feeling, and that drawing gave me that feeling. Nice job. I'll write more after I read this latest installment.

Everything cool with you?

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When the water hole dries up, the animals look at each other differently.
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Uh, I just read your message from March 31...ok, email from now on. Sorry 'bout that :)

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When the water hole dries up, the animals look at each other differently.
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I assume you're still functioning well---in general at least?

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When the water hole dries up, the animals look at each other differently.
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So,uh...what's up? :)

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When the water hole dries up, the animals look at each other differently.
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if you need to get in touch with me, use my email. this is for comments
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Oh I get it....it doesn't refer to anything.

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When the water hole dries up, the animals look at each other differently.
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let's see if you can figure that one out. i wouldn't slap just anything next to my username now, would i?
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What does Autumn Blossom refer to?

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When the water hole dries up, the animals look at each other differently.
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I've been reading your new stuff. I have one basic suggestion, but it'll have to wait for later since it's a long and involved kind of thing. Essentially, I think you have to shoot for "leaner" prose.

It's very good--don't get me wrong.

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When the water hole dries up, the animals look at each other differently.
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Oh, no offense taken. I do get frustrated with my own style. Pacing, word choice, and yeah, number of words...Watch for the next chapter, I'll take what you said into consideration

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